First poem of the year....
Have I
Have I needed too much?
Is that why you’re not there?
Have I said too much?
Too many words from my heart?
Have I cared too much?
Should I have distanced myself?
Have I been around too long?
Has someone (or someone’s) taken my place?
Have I stepped over the line?
So causing the line to recede?
Have I tried too hard?
Would aloof and non-commital have worked better?
Have I been too loyal?
Maybe had I fought with you like the rest….
Have I scared you away?
I think I have….
©Angell 2007
6 comments:
Nice poem.
Your first poem of the year is GREAT! No Angel baby, you have scared me away... SMOOCHES!
Hmmmmm. This can touch on the insecurities at every step of a relationship. Nice.
I felt that, Angell ... way down deep, where you brought it from.
Excellent poem... wonderfully worded
Wow Angell baby, nice job. I'm sure we've all felt that way, at least I have.
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